Today Rohullah and I played 'Roll-A-Story'. He had to roll the dice to choose the character, setting and plot. Rohullah chose Mrs Eeles, hidden music instruments and the driveway. This is the story we wrote together. It took a long time as we talked about each sentence. Great work Rohullah!
This short story about Mrs Ells is really funny the story is interesting a liked the way that you used speech marks
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Fantastic Rahullah. Those are some amazing sentences you have written there.
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ReplyDeleteHi Rohullah I like your story about Mrs Eels it is funny. Keep it up Rohullah.
ReplyDeleteAwesome Rohullah. Wow your story sounds good and it sounds great when we read it sounds good.Keep it up
ReplyDeleteHi Rohullah I like the way that you put in a lot of effort in writing. I think you are doing well.
ReplyDeleteHi Rohullah I like your story because I like how you said that Mrs Eels played a trick on the kids
ReplyDeleteHi Room 5 you have an amazing poster there. The colours of it look very bright .
ReplyDeleteHi Rahullah I like your story because I like how you said that mrs Eeles played a trick on the kids.
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ReplyDeleteWow what a great story you did with Mrs Anderson,I like how you said "This is funny". Rohullah if you keep up this great work you would be a great writer with Mrs Anderson.
Keep up the great work Rohullah.