Hi Manu, I really like how have wrote a good blurb for your duffy books but you said at the end Duffy books in home for my books. I don't understand that so can you please change it,
Those books look really awesome to read if i was you i would be really excited but don't forget that mainfreight helped you to get those books so make sure you thank them.
Hi Manu, You did a fantastic work, but if you add lots of information how did you get this book and who gave this book to you and also remember that main freight gave us the Duffy book and Shavaughn Ruakere hand out the book at Duffy Assembly and also don't forgot to say thank you for them because we are lucky to have a Duffy from school and they also cost money for get these books.Can you explain what does this man" Thank you to Duffy books in homes for my books".Please go back and change it. Manu try to write sentence correctly and read it over again to make sure that it make sense and also if your are writing sentence you must add information and detail so it will be interesting to read. Keep working hard Manu!
Hi Manu, You did a fantastic work, but if you add lots of information how did you get this book and who gave this book to you and I think "Thank you to Duffy books in homes for my books" it doesn't make sense so can you please go back and check if it make sense. Also remember that main freight gave us the Duffy book and Shavaughn Ruakere hand out the book at Duffy Assembly and also don't forgot to say thank you for them because we are lucky to have a Duffy from school and they also cost money for get these books. Can you explain what does this man" Thank you to Duffy books in homes for my books". Manu try to write sentence with lots of information and detail so it will be interesting to read. Keep working hard! Sincerely, Saruja
these are really nice books i am shore everyone else would like to read it to
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ReplyDeleteHey Manu,
ReplyDeleteThese are really cool books and I really hope I get a chance to read them
Hi Manu,
ReplyDeleteI really like how have wrote a good blurb for your duffy books but you said at the end Duffy books in home for my books. I don't understand that so can you please change it,
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Those books look really awesome to read if i was you i would be really excited but don't forget that mainfreight helped you to get those books so make sure you thank them.
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ReplyDeleteHi Manu,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic work, but if you add lots of information how did you get this book and who gave this book to you and also remember that main freight gave us the Duffy book and Shavaughn Ruakere hand out the book at Duffy Assembly and also don't forgot to say thank you for them because we are lucky to have a Duffy from school and they also cost money for get these books.Can you explain what does this man" Thank you to Duffy books in homes for my books".Please go back and change it. Manu try to write sentence correctly and read it over again to make sure that it make sense and also if your are writing sentence you must add information and detail so it will be interesting to read.
Keep working hard Manu!
Hi Manu,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic work, but if you add lots of information how did you get this book and who gave this book to you and I think "Thank you to Duffy books in homes for my books" it doesn't make sense so can you please go back and check if it make sense. Also remember that main freight gave us the Duffy book and Shavaughn Ruakere hand out the book at Duffy Assembly and also don't forgot to say thank you for them because we are lucky to have a Duffy from school and they also cost money for get these books. Can you explain what does this man" Thank you to Duffy books in homes for my books". Manu try to write sentence with lots of information and detail so it will be interesting to read. Keep working hard!
Sincerely,
Saruja