As I took my first step I was terrified so I inched my way up the ladder. It was not long until I started shaking, my palms were sweating so much I thought I was going to lose my grip. I could see heaven. I could taste the fear in my mouth.
When I got to the top I hugged the pole with all my might before Jonny made me let go. I began to walk across. I think I was walking like my hundred year old grandpa! I didn't want to do it but I had friends cheering me on. I didn't want to disappoint them so I pulled my socks up and walked across with confidence. I was really proud of myself because I had challenged myself.
I soon found out that the scary part was still to come. I had to jump off! I was panicking in my head and thinking "How is this rope going to hold me?" Eventually I took a breath and swung down.
Hi Henry,
ReplyDeleteI like your 5 minute at camp it is very interesting and you got cool photos.
Keep it up
Andre
Hi Henry
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described your story with personification
Hi Henry
ReplyDeleteI really like how your story starts off with great hook. I also like how your story makes sentence and how it also ends really good.
By Kapri
WOW Henry it looks like you had a lot of fun climbing up and down the high ropes, and I like how you have written your 5 minute snapshot of camp and I had a really clear picture in my head seing you doing the high ropes.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
Hi Henry,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your five minutes at camp story.
You must of had a heap of fun, I can't wait until I go to camp.Your photos look amazing. Keep up the great work.